Crapzz....

OMG.... just realised yesterday that i got a commom illness....
of one who has not got a good command of english....
As i was typing my statement yesterday... a fellow colleague came over and read... and he pointed out to me...
This is what he said....
"Eh.... u also got the "then" sickness"
and i was like huh??
He carry on saying...
"your statement is full of... " i then", "you then","she then" "then after that"...."
Haha... and i was like oh yah...
and in almost every paragraph there was like a minimun of 2 "then"...
each paragraph was like only 3 to5 sentence...

I subsequently removed almost all of it and replaced it with words like "there after, subsequently, after which"... and it look much better and its almost "then"less.... haha

So ashame of my command of english langauage....
need to do more brushing up, if not i think i will suffer later........